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The initial Note referring to the possibility of you one day adding video tutorials is a waste of time. (I went to your YouTube channel and found no content.) Respectfully, how about you remove the note now, then add it again if you ever create the content?
Typo: slowling down should be slowing down
Typo: Cycle(SDLC) should have a space, like so: Cycle (SDLC)
This sentence could use re-writing: For example, it took long until most prominent Integrated Development Environments(IDEs) could reliably attach themselves to a, let alone multiple, containers in order to develop from within them. I suggest something like: For example, it took a long time before most prominent Integrated Development Environments (IDEs) could reliably attach themselves to one, let alone multiple, containers in order to develop from within them. (Note the space I added before (IDEs)...)
Typo: Manager(RVM) should be Manager (RVM)
Grammatical suggestion: Slightly rewrite this long sentence -- The idea was simple but game-changing, to write a CLI wrapper which would allow the user to seamlessly install and use multiple versions of a given programming language runtime, and that’s precisely what asdf became:-- maybe like so --The idea was simple but game-changing: to write a CLI wrapper which would allow the user to seamlessly install and use multiple versions of a given programming language runtime. And that’s precisely what asdf became:`
Change fine, after all to fine; after all,
I'd recommend editing this tricky phrase we haven’t specified one yet on the local nor the global level to either we haven’t specified one yet on the local or global level or we haven’t specified one yet -- neither on the local nor the global level...
Another optional re-phrase for clarity: change -- Recall our initial objective, we are looking to manage three different projects with their respective runtimes effortlessly and we are still missing the Python 2.7 runtime. -- to something like this -- Recall our initial objective: we are looking to manage three different projects with their respective runtimes effortlessly. We have two runtimes managed, but we are still missing the Python 2.7 runtime.
Typo: atleast should be at least
Typo: which hunt many should be which haunt many
Keep up the great work!
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scottveirs
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Typo and useless YT note on asdf post
Typos and useless YT note on asdf post
Jan 24, 2025
Hi,
Thanks for the intro to ASDF! If you ever want to improve your 2024 ASDF tutorial post, here's some feedback:
Note
referring to the possibility of you one day adding video tutorials is a waste of time. (I went to your YouTube channel and found no content.) Respectfully, how about you remove the note now, then add it again if you ever create the content?slowling down
should beslowing down
Cycle(SDLC)
should have a space, like so:Cycle (SDLC)
For example, it took long until most prominent Integrated Development Environments(IDEs) could reliably attach themselves to a, let alone multiple, containers in order to develop from within them.
I suggest something like:For example, it took a long time before most prominent Integrated Development Environments (IDEs) could reliably attach themselves to one, let alone multiple, containers in order to develop from within them.
(Note the space I added before(IDEs)
...)Manager(RVM)
should beManager (RVM)
-- maybe like so --
The idea was simple but game-changing: to write a CLI wrapper which would allow the user to seamlessly install and use multiple versions of a given programming language runtime. And that’s precisely what asdf became:`fine, after all
tofine; after all,
we haven’t specified one yet on the local nor the global level
to eitherwe haven’t specified one yet on the local or global level
orwe haven’t specified one yet -- neither on the local nor the global level
...Recall our initial objective, we are looking to manage three different projects with their respective runtimes effortlessly and we are still missing the Python 2.7 runtime.
-- to something like this --Recall our initial objective: we are looking to manage three different projects with their respective runtimes effortlessly. We have two runtimes managed, but we are still missing the Python 2.7 runtime.
atleast
should beat least
which hunt many
should bewhich haunt many
Keep up the great work!
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