From 2b948fe5ebf0ac635967abca589a5fb62ef60c39 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Adam Overa Date: Tue, 14 Nov 2023 11:51:33 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Tech Edit 1 --- .../index.md | 22 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/guides/applications/containers/how-to-build-a-cloud-native-private-registry-with-quay/index.md b/docs/guides/applications/containers/how-to-build-a-cloud-native-private-registry-with-quay/index.md index e901ba691bd..9e1beccdfc9 100644 --- a/docs/guides/applications/containers/how-to-build-a-cloud-native-private-registry-with-quay/index.md +++ b/docs/guides/applications/containers/how-to-build-a-cloud-native-private-registry-with-quay/index.md @@ -209,13 +209,13 @@ Follow the steps below to create and configure a PostgreSQL database for Quay: \q ``` -1. Open the `pg_hba.conf` file, normally located in `/var/lib/pgsql/data/`, in a text editor with administrative privileges: +1. Open the `pg_hba.conf` file, normally located at `/var/lib/pgsql/data/`, in a text editor with administrative privileges: ```command sudo nano /var/lib/pgsql/data/pg_hba.conf ``` - Modify the `pg_hba.conf` file to allow for remote connections by editing the `# IPv4 local connections:` line to appear like this: + Modify the `pg_hba.conf` file to allow for remote connections by editing the `# IPv4 local connections:` line to appear like the following: ```file {title="/var/lib/pgsql/data/pg_hba.conf" lang="aconf"} # IPv4 local connections: @@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ Follow the steps below to create and configure a PostgreSQL database for Quay: sudo nano /var/lib/pgsql/data/postgresql.conf ``` - Modify the `postgresql.conf` file to listen on all addresses by modifying the `listen_addresses` line like this: + Modify the `postgresql.conf` file to listen on all addresses by modifying the `listen_addresses` line like the following: ```file {title="/var/lib/pgsql/data/postgresql.conf" lang="aconf"} listen_addresses = '*' @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ Follow the steps below to create and configure a PostgreSQL database for Quay: ### Configuring Redis -Perform these additional Redis configuration tasks for Quay: +Perform the following additional Redis configuration tasks for Quay. 1. Create a Redis configuration file: @@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ Perform these additional Redis configuration tasks for Quay: When done, press CTRL+X, followed by Y then Enter to save the file and exit `nano`: -1. Ensure the change takes hold: +1. Ensure the change take effect: ```command sudo systemctl restart redis @@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ Perform these additional Redis configuration tasks for Quay: ### Generating the Quay Configuration -It’s time to install a copy of Quay. This guide uses the Project Quay version discussed earlier. +It’s time to install a copy of Quay. This guide uses the free and open source Project Quay version discussed earlier. 1. Obtain a copy of Quay: @@ -369,9 +369,9 @@ It’s time to install a copy of Quay. This guide uses the Project Quay version 1. Open a web browser and use the following address format to access Quay: `http://YOUR_IP_ADDRESS:8080/`. -1. Supply `quayconfig` as the username and the password you chose in step three as the password when requested. +1. When requested, supply `quayconfig` as the username along with the password you chose in step three. -1. You need to fill out seven fields across the **Server Configuration**, **Database**, and **Redis** sections. +1. You need to fill out seven fields across the **Server Configuration**, **Database**, and **Redis** sections: - In the **Server Configuration** section, enter your Akamai Cloud Compute Instance's public IPv4 Address for the **Server Hostname** field: @@ -395,7 +395,7 @@ It’s time to install a copy of Quay. This guide uses the Project Quay version 1. Return to the terminal and kill the running Quay server by pressing the CTRL+C key combination. -1. Transfer the `quay-config.tar.gz` file to your user's home (`~/`) directory on your Akamai Cloud Compute Instance: +1. Transfer the `quay-config.tar.gz` file to your user's home (`~/`) directory on your Akamai Cloud Compute Instance. 1. Create storage and configuration directories, then copy the `quay-config.tar.gz` file to the configuration directory: @@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ Starting Quay like this provides you with a continuously scrolling screen of upd ![The Project Quay new user empty repositories screen.](project-quay-new-user-empty-repositories-screen.png "The Project Quay new user empty repositories screen.") -1. Click **Creating a New Repository** to create your first repository. The next screen begins by asking you for a repository name, which must use a number or lowercase letter. Trying to use an uppercase letter causes Quay to complain. +1. Click **Creating a New Repository** to create your first repository. The next screen begins by asking you for a repository name, which must use a number or lowercase letter (uppercase letters may cause Quay to reject the name). ![The Project Quay create repositories screen.](project-quay-create-repositories-screen.png "The Project Quay create repositories screen.") @@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ Starting Quay like this provides you with a continuously scrolling screen of upd 1. Filling the repository begins by issuing either a docker or a podman pull command to obtain the application container. After obtaining the code, you can add tags to it. -1. There is also a **Repository Settings** tab where you can configure the repository details. Part of the settings setup is to add or remove users who have specific repository rights: read, write, and admin. You can also configure events and notifications based on repository activity to keep everyone on the project informed about changes. +1. There is also a **Repository Settings** tab where you can configure the repository details. Part of these settings is to add or remove users and adjust specific repository rights: read, write, and admin. You can also configure events and notifications based on repository activity to keep everyone on the project informed about changes. ![The Project Quay repository settings screen.](project-quay-repository-settings-screen.png "The Project Quay repository settings screen.")