Many sentences are more complex than they probably need to be.

[ericherman]

Having reviewed the contents, I see a number of places where I suspect sentences could be simplified without losing meaning.

Thinking about the Standard for Public Code, and the requirement :

Documentation SHOULD aim for a lower secondary education reading level, as recommended by the Web Content Accessibility Guidelines 2.

I believe we can and should take a pass through the contents with an effort to simplify sentences where possible. When we took that approach with the Standard itself, we all felt the changes were improvements.