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@@ -9,27 +9,25 @@ That capital now belongs to banks, ETFs, and hedge funds.
 The tech of blockchains is soon to be old news.
 
 3. By Being Fiercely Independent
-We can do the right things because we don't owe anything to anyone.
+We can do the right choices because we don't owe anything to anyone.
 - Government: every coin was mined and no money ever raised.
-- VCs: LOL you're all so silly.
+- VCs: silly rabbit, tricks are for kids.
 - Foundation: no need for theater.
-- Crypto bros: we don't play your toxic games.
+- Crypto: we don't play your toxic games.
 
-4. Using Modern Tools
-Programmable capital needs a cutting edge chain.
-We've been running experimental Diem and Move networks since 2019.
-Our blockchain has every smart contract you need to use LIBRA, minus the garbage.
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-5. To Produce the Best Open Asset
+5. In Order to Produce the Best Open Asset
 Singularly focused on what an open, perpetual, and meaningful asset means.
 Technology decays, but content is forever.
 Think LIBRA, not blockchain.
 
+4. Using Modern Tools
+We've been running experimental Diem and Move networks since 2019.
+Our blockchain has every smart contract you need to use LIBRA, minus the garbage.
+With great tools for people to save and plan for the future.
 
 6. With Plans Measured in Centuries
-We built tools for people to save and plan for the future.
-Communities with evergreen endowments to create interventions in society.
 We plan always be a part of the future, whatever it may bring.
+Communities with evergreen endowments to create interventions in society.
 
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