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 3. By Producing the Best Open Asset
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-LIBRA is an accessible and perpetual digital property. It is carefully designed for its purpose: capital. Prosperity comes from people saving and planning for transformation. All of the LIBRA possible has already been produced, and remarkably 95% of it has been saved, pledged, or donated for the future.
+LIBRA is an accessible and perpetual digital property. It is carefully designed for its purpose: capital. Prosperity comes from people saving and planning for transformation. The entire LIBRA supply has already been produced, and remarkably our users saved, pledged, or donated 95% of their assets for the future.
 
 4. Which is Fiercely Independent,
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-We make the right choices because we don't owe anything to anyone.
+We make correct choices because we don't owe anything to anyone.
 - Government proof: every coin was mined and no money ever raised.
 - No Labs or Foundation: yes to moral authority and meritocracy.
 - So long, Crypto industry: we'll play games the world wants to play.
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 5. Uses Modern Tools,
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-Having our own Layer-1 blockchain ensures our freedom. We've been running high performance Diem and Move networks since 2019. We intend for the chain to have all the smart contracts you need to use, save, plan with LIBRA, but none of the nonsense to distract us. Think LIBRA, not Blockchain.
+Having our own Layer-1 blockchain ensures LIBRA's freedom. We've been running high performance Diem and Move networks since 2019. The chain is meant to have all the smart contracts anyone would need to use, save, plan with LIBRA, but none of the nonsense to distract us. Think LIBRA, not Blockchain.
 
 6. Has Plans Measured in Centuries
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-We play a long game that few have patience for. There is a desert to cross and the prize is worth the sacrifice.
+We play a long game that few have patience for. There is a desert to cross, though the prize is worth the sacrifice.
 
 7. To Become an Unstoppable Force
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