Content: Injury expansion #3335
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-fixed a bunch of typos -changed greenleaf nursery fire event weight to 20 -reworded some events to help them flow better and/or better convey intent
pronoun test please pass please
| "m_c" | ||
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| "injuries": [ | ||
| "water in their lungs" |
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Will this be changed somehow to be sand instead of water?
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right now no - in the future we can discuss adding new injuries?
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I feel like it'll get reported as a bug a lot :( People will read that the cat should have sand in their lungs, but the condition will say it's water, which is confusing. I do think its a nice event though
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Here me out: we leave this event as it is, and once the PR is merged to dev, create an issue about it and find a coder willing to fix it?
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| "weight": 20, | ||
| "event_text": "The rains bounce off the hard-baked ground, leaving puddles and slippery mud literally everywhere. While the water is welcome, the lack of traction is not, and m_c grumbles when {PRONOUN/m_c/subject} {VERB/m_c/end/ends} up going arse over tail from a misstep.", |
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iirc we use rump instead of arse
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does arse really count as a swear word? Will change if it does
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I did look back through the chats and found a few discussions about it, the consensus seemed to be that it is
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fuuuuuck really ugh. Okay, then I'll rewrite to a phrase that doesn't reference the 'falling tits over arse' saying
| "m_c" | ||
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| "scar": "Spiky spinifex started a fire that burned m_c.", | ||
| "reg_death": "Infected burns can be deadly.", |
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I feel like this could use more detail, maybe include a bit about them being from the spinifex?
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hmmm I kinda like sometimes having short histories as well as long ones tho? I kept it short because spinifex starting fire with spontaneous combustion is kinda overly complicated to explain
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yeah i get that! it just feels really abrupt the way it's currently written 🤔
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| "reg_death": "Infected burns can be deadly.", | |
| "reg_death": "Infected burns can be deadly, cutting m_c's life short.", |
Okay! How's this?
About The Pull Request
Establishes baseline injury pool for future new biome
Why This Is Good For ClanGen
Step towards new biome
Proof of Testing
Cannot test due to desert biome not being created.