Kaleido-subs · bucket3432 · Sep 26, 2024
diff --git a/03/Joshiraku 03 - Notes.ass b/03/Joshiraku 03 - Notes.ass
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 Comment: 0,0:01:44.21,0:01:48.34,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(93,97)}Parody on the magazine, Hanako, a publication by Magazine House. \Nwhich features the Ebisu-Daikanyama-Nakameguro areas. Its \Ntarget demographic is woman in their twenties.
-Comment: 0,0:01:44.21,0:01:48.34,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(214,301)}The "Destroyed music that pops uselessly" was also featured on \Nthe advertisements for the {\i1}A Certain Scientific Railgun{\i0} OVA in \N2010, which was done by the same studio as {\i1}Rakugo Girls{\i0}.
+Comment: 0,0:01:44.21,0:01:48.34,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(214,301)}The "Destroyed music that pops uselessly" was also featured on \Nthe advertisements for the {\i1}A Certain Scientific Railgun{\i0} OVA in \N2010, which was done by the same studio as {\i1}Rakugo Girls{\i0}.{bkt: I would consider adding "on the cover" after the second double quote. The note shows up before the cover does and anyone pausing might get confused. Alternatively, adjust the start time so it starts when the cover appears.}
 Comment: 0,0:01:52.22,0:01:56.18,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(131,83)}The chapter this section adapts came out \Non February 9th 2010, so they had to \Nchange the dates around a tiny bit.
 Comment: 0,0:02:03.31,0:02:10.49,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(99,73)}{\i1}Ichikawa Danjuurou{\i0}, the 11th person to hold the {\i1}Ebizou{\i0} title. \NHis name and many escapades get brought up often in this show.
 Comment: 0,0:02:03.31,0:02:10.49,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(245,224)}In 2006, {\i1}The Telegraph{\i0} newspaper went as far as to label \Nhim the {\i1}Brad Pitt of kabuki{\i0}. Additionally, he gained some \Nnotoriety for a brawl incident in 2010. {https://www.telegraph.co.uk/culture/theatre/3652463/The-Brad-Pitt-of-kabuki.html}
 Comment: 0,0:02:03.31,0:02:10.49,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(882,733)}The elephant censor bleeps help confirm it's {\i1}Ebizou{\i0}, \Nas "elephant" in Japanese is {\i1}zou{\i0}.
-Comment: 0,0:02:18.28,0:02:21.28,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(851,117)}In Japan, it's customary for boys to give girls chocolate \Nfor Valentine's, and girls to give boys a different gift on \NWhite Day the following month. {\i1}Not{\i0} the other way around.
-Comment: 0,0:02:34.30,0:02:36.76,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(137,75)}{\i1}S{\i0} was slang in all-girls' schools in the {\i1}Taisho{\i0} and {\i1}Showa{\i0} \Nperiods and refers to same-sex love. It stands for \N{\i1}Sister{\i0}. It's {\i1}not{\i0} the S for {\i1}sadist{\i0}, though they certainly \Ndominated the hearts of many young maidens.
+Comment: 0,0:02:18.28,0:02:21.28,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(851,117)}In Japan, it's customary for boys to give girls chocolate \Nfor Valentine's, and girls to give boys a different gift on \NWhite Day the following month. {\i1}Not{\i0} the other way around.{bkt: The last sentence is a sentence fragment. It should be joined to the previous sentence (but then the sentence becomes too long) or rewritten to be complete.}
+Comment: 0,0:02:34.30,0:02:36.76,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(137,75)}{\i1}S{\i0} was slang in all-girls' schools in the {\i1}Taisho{\i0} and {\i1}Showa{\i0} \Nperiods and refers to same-sex love. It stands for \N{\i1}Sister{\i0}. It's {\i1}not{\i0} the S for {\i1}sadist{\i0}, though they certainly \Ndominated the hearts of many young maidens.{bkt: The dialogue has no apostrophe on "all-girls". I think both are correct, but the usage should be consistent.}
 Comment: 0,0:02:34.30,0:02:36.76,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(244,324)}{\i1}Prince{\i0} was often used to refer to more tomboyish female \Nstudents, and may have been inspired by {\i1}Takarazuka Revue{\i0}, \Na Japanese all-female musical theatre troupe.
 Comment: 0,0:03:08.00,0:03:10.46,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(131,72)}{\i1}Otoko no ko{\i0}, as used by Marii here, refers to a man who looks very feminine. \NIn English, the common way to call them nowadays is {\i1}femboys{\i0}.
-Comment: 0,0:03:08.00,0:03:10.46,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(259,235)}Cross-dressing is the act of dressing as \Nthe opposite gender they identify as.
+Comment: 0,0:03:08.00,0:03:10.46,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(259,235)}Cross-dressing is the act of dressing as \Nthe opposite gender they identify as.{bkt: Too many "as"'s. Consider rewording.}
 Comment: 0,0:05:35.02,0:05:38.32,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(926,130)}Reference to a line spoken by Optimus Prime \Nin the Japanese dub of {\i1}Transformers{\i0}. This is \Nusually a death flag, however.
 Comment: 0,0:05:40.24,0:05:41.61,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(155,115)}Parody of {\i1}Time Bokan{\i0}, where the narrator \Nuses this same turn of phrase.
 Comment: 0,0:06:27.45,0:06:31.41,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(1080,102)}Pun on {\i1}saibou{\i0} (sewing) and the chant "say ho", \Noften found in hip-hop and similar genres.
@@ -66,30 +66,31 @@ Comment: 0,0:09:33.34,0:09:37.72,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(936,98)}Walter Spies,
 Comment: 0,0:09:40.77,0:09:44.19,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(867,106)}An Italian liqueur, originally coloured with carmine dye, \Nwhich was derived from crushed cochineal.
 Comment: 0,0:10:09.96,0:10:11.42,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(102,50)}Inspired by the Arch of Titus in Rome, Napoleon Bonaparte, \Nfollowing the Roman tradition, ordered the construction of \Nthe Arc de Triomphe in celebration of his victory in the \NBattle of Austerlitz in 1805.
 Comment: 0,0:10:13.93,0:10:15.39,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(117,99)}The gate was commissioned by King Frederick William II of \NPrussia as a sign of peace and built between 1788 and 1791.
-Comment: 0,0:10:55.18,0:11:05.14,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(94,67)}Japanese sports festivals have their roots in the Naval Academy's 1874 \Nathletic meet (known as the {\i1}Kyotogyo{\i0}), guided by British instructors. By \N1883, similar events were held at the University of Tokyo, prompting the \NMinistry of Education to advocate for sports festivals in schools nationwide.
+Comment: 0,0:10:55.18,0:11:05.14,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(94,67)}Japanese sports festivals have their roots in the Naval Academy's 1874 \Nathletic meet (known as the {\i1}Kyotogyo{\i0}), guided by British instructors. By \N1883, similar events were held at the University of Tokyo, prompting the \NMinistry of Education to advocate for sports festivals in schools nationwide.{bkt: What's the kanji for Kyotogyo? I can't seem to find anything on it with that term. I do see this, however: https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%AB%B6%E9%97%98%E9%81%8A%E6%88%AF}
 Comment: 0,0:10:55.18,0:11:05.14,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(710,394)}The sports festival march, {\i1}Alte Kameraden{\i0}, is a German military \Nmarch and has become a standard tune for such occasions.
-Comment: 0,0:11:17.41,0:11:19.45,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(461,40)}This sign to the left says {\i1}Annual Toothpick Purification \Nand Flavour Offerings Ceremony: Rai Mountain{\i0}, and is an \Nannual event held on June 18th at Sensoji Temple.
+Comment: 0,0:11:17.41,0:11:19.45,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(461,40)}This sign to the left says {\i1}Annual Toothpick Purification \Nand Flavour Offerings Ceremony: Rai Mountain{\i0}, and is an \Nannual event held on June 18th at Sensoji Temple.{bkt: Dialogue has "Sensouji", which I would keep.}
 Comment: 0,0:11:47.52,0:11:50.69,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(874,133)}This line shows up in the Dragon Quest games when \Na monster wants to be recruited into your party.
 Comment: 0,0:08:47.63,0:08:49.18,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(1164,97)}Notice how she's walking pigeon-toed \Nto appear more feminine?
 Comment: 0,0:14:56.92,0:15:00.59,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(133,117)}{\i1}Go-honzon{\i0}, the main subject of worship at a temple.
-Comment: 0,0:12:02.28,0:12:12.29,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(126,45)}\NIn Asakusa, visitors partake in a ritual at Senso-ji Temple, \Nwhere they purify themselves with incense, write wishes, \Nmake offerings, and ring bells to seek divine favour.
-Comment: 0,0:12:28.81,0:12:28.81,Trivia,,0,0,0,skip?,{\pos(226,70)}TODO: Talk about kanji readings, the different temples, how the confusion with Akiba happened, etc.
-Comment: 0,0:12:59.43,0:12:59.43,Trivia,,0,0,0,skip?,{\pos(226,70)}TODO: Talk about drawing lots, the origins of the different types of luck, Sensoji being famous for bad luck, etc.
+Comment: 0,0:12:02.28,0:12:12.29,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(126,45)}\NIn Asakusa, visitors partake in a ritual at Senso-ji Temple, \Nwhere they purify themselves with incense, write wishes, \Nmake offerings, and ring bells to seek divine favour.{bkt: Dialogue has "Sensouji".}
+Comment: 0,0:12:28.81,0:12:28.81,Trivia,TODO,0,0,0,skip?,{\pos(226,70)}TODO: Talk about kanji readings, the different temples, how the confusion with Akiba happened, etc.
+Comment: 0,0:12:59.43,0:12:59.43,Trivia,TODO,0,0,0,skip?,{\pos(226,70)}TODO: Talk about drawing lots, the origins of the different types of luck, Sensoji being famous for bad luck, etc.
 Comment: 0,0:14:20.84,0:14:29.60,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(106,54)}Only Kigurumi is drinking a non-alcoholic beverage. \NThat's because she's actually underage.
 Comment: 0,0:14:20.84,0:14:29.60,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(826,234)}That said, in the rakugo community, only Seconds and \Nabove are allowed to drink, even in private. So Tetora \Nand Kururu should not be drinking.
 Comment: 0,0:14:34.90,0:14:39.11,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(124,80)}They're drinking {\i1}Hoppy{\i0}, a low-alcohol beverage \Noriginating from {\i1}Kamiya Bar{\i0} in Asakusa in 1948.
 Comment: 0,0:15:04.22,0:15:06.39,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(90,436)}The {\i1}Asahi Flame{\i0}, claimed to represent the "burning heart of Asahi beer". \NIt's often colloquially coined the "golden turd", and in turn the Asahi \NBeer Hall itself is called the "poo building".
 Comment: 0,0:15:04.22,0:15:06.39,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(570,670)}The joke here is that Marii was asking for {\i1}un{\i0} (luck), \Nbut she was blessed by the {\i1}unko{\i0} (turd).
 Comment: 0,0:15:29.99,0:15:31.99,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(96,93)}This title is a reference to the rakugo play, "Sanada Kozo".
 Comment: 0,0:15:29.99,0:15:31.99,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(184,227)}"ZOO" is from the group of the same name, \Nwho sang the original Choo Choo TRAIN song \Nused as the punchline in this episode.
-Comment: 0,0:15:29.99,0:15:31.99,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(787,829)}The translation focuses more on Tetora's luck. \N "Raku" is how "Luck" is be pronounced with a \Nthick Japanese accent.
+Comment: 0,0:15:29.99,0:15:31.99,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(787,829)}The translation focuses more on Tetora's luck. \N "Raku" is how "Luck" is be pronounced with a \Nthick Japanese accent.{bkt: Drop "be" before "pronounced".}
 Comment: 0,0:18:48.15,0:18:58.78,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(162,216)}Chidejika and Analoguma, mascosts representing digital \Nterrestrial and analogue broadcasting respectively.
-Comment: 0,0:18:48.15,0:18:58.78,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(890,373)}Analoguma was created by 2ch, and would go on \Nto become the {\i1}pedobear{\i0} meme in the west.
+Comment: 0,0:18:48.15,0:18:58.78,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(890,373)}Analoguma was created by 2ch, and would go on \Nto become the {\i1}pedobear{\i0} meme in the west.{bkt: "west" in "the west" should be capitalized.}{bkt: The bear already existed as a character years before 2ch put an antenna on its head. The bear's appropriation as Pedobear in the West also predates Analoguma. https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%82%AF%E3%83%9E%E3%83%BC https://knowyourmeme.com/memes/analoguma https://knowyourmeme.com/memes/pedobear }
 Comment: 0,0:18:48.15,0:18:58.78,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(150,529)}This conversation references the scandal involving the actor \N{\i1}Tsuyoshi Kusanagi{\i0}, a frontman for promoting digital broadcast, \Nwho was arrested for public nudity in 2009.
 Comment: 0,0:18:48.15,0:18:58.78,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(672,739)}The yellow attire of Chidejika may resemble a school swimsuit \Nor leotard, but the official stance denied these associations.
-Comment: 0,0:16:53.91,0:16:57.12,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(166,80)}A Japanese children's song.
+Comment: 0,0:16:53.91,0:16:57.12,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(166,80)}A Japanese children's song.{bkt: The song is called "Yuki" (meaning "snow"): https://mkchatinjapanese.com/2021/02/02/a-japanese-childrens-song-%E7%AB%A5%E8%AC%A1%E3%80%80%E3%82%86%E3%81%8D%EF%BC%89snow/ }
 Comment: 0,0:17:10.01,0:17:13.18,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(98,86)}The same uniforms as seen in {\i1}Waiting in the Summer{\i0}.
 Comment: 0,0:17:17.85,0:17:27.57,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(1096,84)}This scene bears a striking similarity to a \Nscene in episode 3 of {\i1}Waiting in the Summer{\i0}.
+Comment: 0,0:17:40.75,0:17:43.21,Trivia,bkt,0,0,0,kara,{bkt: This is surely a reference to the lucky cat: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maneki-neko }
 Comment: 0,0:17:43.21,0:17:45.92,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(1078,124)}Tea stems floating perfectly vertical \Nare often considered to be a good omen.
 Comment: 0,0:17:46.67,0:17:53.39,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(1218,170)}500 yen bills are unbelievably rare.
 Comment: 0,0:18:00.10,0:18:05.06,Trivia,,0,0,0,kara,{\pos(1144,94)}Hammerin' Harry from {\i1}Hammerin' Harry{\i0}.