Editorial: simplify abstract and move credential types to introductio…

…n. (#82)
WICG · Feb 27, 2024 · 0a84e70 · 0a84e70
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   <body data-cite="credential-management-1">
     <section id="abstract">
       <p>
-        This document specifies an API to allow user agents to mediate access
-        to, and representing, a verifiably-issued digital credential (e.g., a
-        government issued digital driver's license, a passport issued by a
-        country, a student card or diploma issued by a university, an employee
-        card issued by a company, a passenger's boarding pass issued by an
-        airline, a profile issued by an online social network, membership
-        cards, vaccination records, etc) license). The API builds on
-        [[[credential-management-1]]] as a means to request a digital
-        credential from the user agent or underlying platform.
+        This document specifies an API to enable [=user agents=] to mediate
+        access to, and presentation of, digital credentials such as a driver's
+        license, government-issued identification card, and/or [=credential type
+        examples|other types of digital credential=]. The API builds on
+        [[[credential-management-1]]] as a means by which to request a digital
+        credential from a user agent or underlying platform.
       </p>
     </section>
     <section id="sotd">
@@ -64,6 +61,19 @@ <h2>
     <p>
       TBW
     </p>
+    <p id="credential-type-examples">
+      There are many types of digital credential that can be conveyed using
+      this API. <dfn data-lt="credential type examples">
+      Examples of these types</dfn> include:
+    </p>
+    <ul>
+      <li>
+        a driver's license or identity card issued by a government institution
+      </li>
+      <li>
+        TBW: other credential types
+      </li>
+    </ul>
     <h2>
       Model
     </h2>