update: refine about page content and descriptions

app/about/page.mdx

@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@ import Image from "next/image";
 
 export const metadata = {
   title: 'Emre Can Kartal',
-  description: 'An overview of my career and technical contributions',
+  description: 'I\'m a tech enthusiast with an anthropology background, passionate about creating narratives that drive ethical growth.',
   openGraph: {
     title: 'Emre Can Kartal',
-    description: 'An overview of my career and technical contributions',
+    description: 'I\'m a tech enthusiast with an anthropology background, passionate about creating narratives that drive ethical growth.',
     images: [{ url: '/about/opengraph-image' }]
   }
 }
@@ -26,20 +26,20 @@ export const metadata = {
 
 I'm a tech enthusiast with an anthropology background, passionate about creating narratives that drive ethical growth for ventures I have a stake in.
 
-I'm a team member at [Homebrew Research](https://homebrew.ltd/), a local AI company that is creator and lead maintainer of [Jan](https://jan.ai) and [Cortex](https://cortex.so). We also train open-source AI models and tinker with hardware.
+I'm a team member at [Homebrew Research](https://homebrew.ltd/), a local AI company that is creator and lead maintainer of [Jan](https://jan.ai) and [Cortex](https://cortex.so). We also train open-source AI models (e.g. [Ichigo](https://github.com/homebrewltd/ichigo)) and tinker with hardware.
 
 I'm just observing, learning and doing. I've been working since age 14 -mostly alongside entrepreneurs and investors- to help their businesses become both profitable and respected. 
 
 ## Current curiosities:
 
 - [Python](https://www.reddit.com/r/learnpython/comments/1ex28j0/comment/lj2ttfz/): Some might say it’s not the best time, but I disagree
-- [SBC](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single-board_computer): for on-device AI that we can tinker with
+- [SBC](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single-board_computer): Tinkering with on-device AI to be opinionated about robotics
 - 中文: To talk in hardware language
 
 ## Achievements I'm proud of:
 
-- Since 2012: Helped some folks toward their first customers & revenue
-- 2023: Helped pivot an eCommerce analytics company from sales narrative to socials
+- Since 2012: Helped some folks toward their first customers
+- 2023: Helped shape an eCommerce analytics company from mesasging to sales narratives
 - 2023: Began traveling through Southeast Asia to find the place that resonates most with me and my spouse
-- 2022: Contributed to organizing the largest game-industry conference in MENA
-- 2019: Built the biggest esports media platform in Turkiye
+- 2022: Contributed to organizing the largest game-industry conference in Turkiye & MENA
+- 2019: Helped build the biggest esports media platform in Turkiye