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 > We are what we pretend to be, so we must be careful about what we pretend to be. - Kurt Vonnegut
 
-I'd like to pretend to be a person who is curious about everyting related to human.
-*and a good way to start a blog is quote some wise words resonates with ones ideas.*
+I'd like to pretend to be a person who is curious about something related to humans and patterns of our interaction with our surroundings and machines.
+*and a good way to start a blog is to quote some wise words resonate with one's ideas.*
 
 I'm Emre, a tech enthusiast with an anthropology background. Keep reading [About](https://emreckartal.com) page to learn more about me.
 
-I've created this blog to stack my my thoughts, frameworks, the things I'd like to start in order to see how I change over time. 
+I've created this blog to stack my thoughts, frameworks, the things I'd like to start in order to see how I change over time. 
 
 So this is my open notebook where my ideas and plans first take shape—a place where I can think through writing on my own.