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docs/marketplace-docs/guides/prometheus-grafana/index.md

@@ -47,24 +47,19 @@ Grafana is an analytics and monitoring solution with a focus on accessibility fo
 
 #### Akamai Datasource Plugin (Optional)
 
-If your Akamai account contract has **Reporting** enabled you can take advantage of the **[Akamai Reporting API V2](https://techdocs.akamai.com/reporting/v2/reference/api)**. This allows you to expose data to monitor traffic, analyze patterns and long-term trends directly into Grafana.
+If your Akamai account contract has **Reporting** enabled, you can take advantage of the **[Akamai Reporting API V2](https://techdocs.akamai.com/reporting/v2/reference/api)**. This allows you to expose data to monitor traffic, analyze patterns and long-term trends directly into Grafana.
 
-Before you can fill out the necessary fields below you will need to create API client credentials. Please refer to Akamai's Techdocs to create the necessary credentials needed:
+**Before you begin**: To get the values for required fields, you need to have API client credentials. If you don't know how to create an API client for your Akamai account, check [Create EdgeGrid authentication credentials](https://techdocs.akamai.com/developer/docs/set-up-authentication-credentials).
 
-- [Get Started](https://techdocs.akamai.com/reporting/v2/reference/get-started)
-- [Create Authentication Credentials](https://techdocs.akamai.com/developer/docs/set-up-authentication-credentials)
-
-{{< note type="warning" title="Installing The Plugin">}}
-In order to configure the Akamai Insights Datasource plugin you **must** fill out all of the fields. Leaving any of the fields blank will result in the plugin not being installed.
-{{< /note >}}
 
+To add the plugin, enter your API client data to the corresponding fields. Leaving any of the fields blank will result in the plugin not being installed.
 - **Akamai client_secret:** Enter your `client_secret` value.
 - **Akamai host:** Enter your Akamai `host` value. This typically ends in **luna.akamaiapis.net**.
 - **Akamai access_token:** Enter your `access_token` value.
 - **Akamai client_token:** Enter your `client_token` value.
 
 {{< note type="warning" >}}
-Akamai's Grafana data source plugin, as being offered here, is licensed to you under Apache License Version 2.0.  Copyright Akamai 2024.  Akamai's Grafana data source plugin uses Grafana's Plugin tools (https://github.com/grafana/plugin-tools) software, which is licensed under Apache License Version 2.0 whose terms are available at http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0. Please note that this is an unsigned plugin and is provided as-is.
+Akamai's Grafana data source plugin, as being offered here, is licensed to you under Apache License Version 2.0.  Copyright Akamai 2024.  Akamai's Grafana data source plugin uses [Grafana's Plugin tools](https://github.com/grafana/plugin-tools) software, which is licensed under Apache License Version 2.0 whose terms are available at http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0. Remember that this is an unsigned plugin and is provided as-is.
 {{< /note >}}
 
 ## Getting Started after Deployment
@@ -135,13 +130,13 @@ Once the app has been *fully* deployed, you need to obtain the credentials from
 
 Now that the Prometheus Data Source is set, you can browse the [available Grafana dashboards](https://grafana.com/grafana/dashboards/) to see which dashboard fits your needs. Review the official [Prometheus](https://prometheus.io/docs/introduction/overview/) and [Grafana](https://grafana.com/docs/grafana/latest/) documentation to learn how to further use your instance.
 
-### Akamai Insights Datasource 
+### Akamai Insights Datasource
 
-If you opted to add the Akamai Insights Datasource plugin you will find the datasource present in the Data Sources tab.
+If you added the Akamai Insights Datasource plugin, the data source is in the **Data sources** tab.
     ![All Data Sources](grafana_datasource4.png)
 
 
-Once you click **akamai-insights-datasource** You can test access by clicking the **Save & test** button. If everything is working correctly you will see the following message.
+To check if the plugin works, open **akamai-insights-datasource** and click **Save & test**. You should get the *Data source is working properly* message.
     ![Working Akamai DS](grafana_akamai_ds.png)
 
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