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Removed unnecessary punctuation marks and words Removed finger pointing icon for consistency Broke a sentence into two since it seems like two different thoughts
dorbin
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@@ -44,8 +44,9 @@ endpoint depends on how you've configured your [Spinnaker | |||
endpoints](/setup/security) -- if you're running on a different endpoint, for | |||
example `https://api.spinnaker-prod.net`, that'll be shown instead. | |||
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Keeping track of that endpoint as `$ENDPOINT` (it will depend on where | |||
Spinnaker is installed), save that pipeline, and run: | |||
Keeping track of that endpoint as `$ENDPOINT` will depend on where |
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Maybe just:
"Save that pipeline and run:
[command, including $ENDPOINT]
Where $ENDPOINT is the URL for the endpoint, which depends on where Spinnaker is installed."
Or something like that?
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These would work better as imperative verbs in numbered steps, but you'd have to do that to the entire article.
This paragraph here is the third step in this section.
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Removed unnecessary punctuation marks and words
Removed finger pointing icon for consistency
Broke a sentence into two since it seems like two different thoughts